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Those of you who have been following my blog for a few years may be aware that I love art and collect it in various files on my computer so that I can gaze at it and ponder or sigh or be inspired or what-have-you. Once, I even posted weekly Art History/Appreciation entries. Remember those?
Well, every once in a while, movies or my web searches for new art will cause me to stumble across images that inspire stories or seem to fit ones that I've already written. And as Wordweaver has come to revolve solely around my writing, I thought it might be fun to occasionally post some of these images and a tidbit about the character or setting that they bring to mind.
The image that inspired this blog idea was this one:
Disclaimer: I know nothing about this image, neither its name nor who painted it, but I would dearly love to know. I found it on some wallpaper site during a random Google search. Please post if you have this information, so I can give credit where it's due and promote the artist with a link.
Point is, the moment I saw this image, I gasped and said, "That's Lyrienn!"
CHARACTER PROFILE
Project: The Falcons Saga
Name: Lyrienn
Race: Elf
Home: Lady's Palace, Linndun
Family: daughter of Danyth and Leavhan, sister to Lothiar and Laniel
Significance to the story: handmaid to Lady Aerdria; helps Kieryn through his darkest time.
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Wednesday, September 19, 2012
Monday, September 17, 2012
Falcons Saga - Progress Report #5
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Well, last Monday I thought, "This chapter is going to be a breeze. I'll bet I get it finished, plus part of Chapter 6." That was until I saw the need for a new scene, and remembered that I had a contest entry to write for LegendFire. So my contest entry took up the last few hours on Friday, meaning Chapter 5 didn't get finished after all. This is the first week that I've not reached my chapter goal (given normal circumstances). Bummer.
The contest promises to be a fun one, however. We've never done one exactly like it. One of our members proposed a Character Creation Contest, in which we choose between two prompts, flesh out the character in a profile, then write a brief excerpt showing their, um, character. I can't give away too much about my entry before the voting is over, but it resulted in my first-ever piece of flash fiction, so I'm doubly excited about it.
THIS WEEK'S PROGRESS
Chapter(s) of the Week: 5
Pages Revised: 7.5, which became 17
New Scenes: 1, 4.5 pages worth
Good things that happen: Kethlyn and his royal cousin conduct a successful kitchen raid.
Bad things that happen: They end up stuck in a dark, haunted place.
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Well, last Monday I thought, "This chapter is going to be a breeze. I'll bet I get it finished, plus part of Chapter 6." That was until I saw the need for a new scene, and remembered that I had a contest entry to write for LegendFire. So my contest entry took up the last few hours on Friday, meaning Chapter 5 didn't get finished after all. This is the first week that I've not reached my chapter goal (given normal circumstances). Bummer.
The contest promises to be a fun one, however. We've never done one exactly like it. One of our members proposed a Character Creation Contest, in which we choose between two prompts, flesh out the character in a profile, then write a brief excerpt showing their, um, character. I can't give away too much about my entry before the voting is over, but it resulted in my first-ever piece of flash fiction, so I'm doubly excited about it.
THIS WEEK'S PROGRESS
Chapter(s) of the Week: 5
Pages Revised: 7.5, which became 17
New Scenes: 1, 4.5 pages worth
Good things that happen: Kethlyn and his royal cousin conduct a successful kitchen raid.
Bad things that happen: They end up stuck in a dark, haunted place.
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Friday, September 7, 2012
The Falcons Saga - Progress Report #4
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The last two weeks have been slow going on the novel. First a head cold threw a kink into things, then one of my beloved uncles died. Ah, perspective. There I was, complaining about being unable to breathe or sleep, while my uncle was lying in a hospital battling a Staph infection. After visiting the family and attending the funeral, only halfway recovered from that blasted cold, I was exhausted come Wednesday, and so the writing had to wait yet another day. But here comes Friday and chapter 4 is complete.
THIS WEEK'S PROGRESS
Chapter(s) of the Week: 4
Pages Revised: 8, which became 16
New Scenes: 1, 3 pages worth
Good things that happen: Laral ventures into Fiera
Bad things that happen: Laral must choose between love and loyalty
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The last two weeks have been slow going on the novel. First a head cold threw a kink into things, then one of my beloved uncles died. Ah, perspective. There I was, complaining about being unable to breathe or sleep, while my uncle was lying in a hospital battling a Staph infection. After visiting the family and attending the funeral, only halfway recovered from that blasted cold, I was exhausted come Wednesday, and so the writing had to wait yet another day. But here comes Friday and chapter 4 is complete.
THIS WEEK'S PROGRESS
Chapter(s) of the Week: 4
Pages Revised: 8, which became 16
New Scenes: 1, 3 pages worth
Good things that happen: Laral ventures into Fiera
Bad things that happen: Laral must choose between love and loyalty
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Monday, August 27, 2012
The Falcons Saga - Progress Report #3
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Lots of meaningful information in these pages. Now, just to find the most entertaining, punchy way to tell it. Ah, but it is so painful when scenes I love no longer work and must be cut. Killing one's darlings is never fun. Good thing is, I will still have them saved in the old draft, so they're not gone completely, and readers will never know the difference. Trick is, then, to make the entire final version my darling and be proud of the content that survives the cut.THIS WEEK'S PROGRESS
Chapter(s) of the Week: 3
Pages Revised: 12
Deaths: 0
Births: 1
Good things that happen: Thorn goes home
Bad things that happen: old tensions surface
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Monday, August 20, 2012
The Falcons Saga - Progress Report #2
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Given that there are currently 44 chapters in the rough draft, and given that there are 52 weeks in a year, and given that there will be holidays and the occasional need to flee the novel for a few days here and there to save my sanity, I think it's safe to say that rewrites on Falcons 2 will take at least a year. That's if I succeed in rewriting one chapter a week. The tally does not make me happy, but there it is. A realistic estimate, for now.
But, like I said last post, rather than look at the whole wall to be built, take it one brick at a time.
THIS WEEK'S PROGRESS
Pages Revised: 3 1/2
Pages of New Content: 5
Deaths: 30+
Dreadful Happenings: There is much blood on the snow
Positive Happenings: Kelyn is going to miss a certain lady
Given that there are currently 44 chapters in the rough draft, and given that there are 52 weeks in a year, and given that there will be holidays and the occasional need to flee the novel for a few days here and there to save my sanity, I think it's safe to say that rewrites on Falcons 2 will take at least a year. That's if I succeed in rewriting one chapter a week. The tally does not make me happy, but there it is. A realistic estimate, for now.
But, like I said last post, rather than look at the whole wall to be built, take it one brick at a time.
THIS WEEK'S PROGRESS
Pages Revised: 3 1/2
Pages of New Content: 5
Deaths: 30+
Dreadful Happenings: There is much blood on the snow
Positive Happenings: Kelyn is going to miss a certain lady
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Monday, August 13, 2012
The Falcons Saga - Progress Report #1
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Here we go again. A full week of writing (or rewriting, as the case may be) is under my belt. Ground has been broken, and what do I find but bricks strewn absolutely everywhere. Reconstruction has begun.
I was rather disheartened last weekend when I opened that huge 3-ring binder to read over chapter one and found that what I thought was good was, in fact, shallow characterization and boring exposition. Instead of penciling in corrections line by line, I sat down at my laptop, heaved a sigh of dread, and typed "Part One, Chapter 1." This is going to be an uphill battle, no mistake. I refuse to set a deadline yet. Doing so, I fear, will be setting myself up for failure and expectant readers for disappointment. So, suffice to say, I'm taking it one chapter at a time, one scene at a time, one page at a time. If you look at the building as a whole and how much progress still has to be made, the job can look daunting, even impossible, but keeping focus on one brick stacked on top of another doesn't seem like that big of a deal.
So here's to the long haul! See you at the other end.
THIS WEEK'S PROGRESS
Number of pages revised: 5 1/2
Character deaths: 1
Dreadful happenings: a young prince makes a deadly move
Positive happenings: a young prince finds hope in a new friend
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Here we go again. A full week of writing (or rewriting, as the case may be) is under my belt. Ground has been broken, and what do I find but bricks strewn absolutely everywhere. Reconstruction has begun.
I was rather disheartened last weekend when I opened that huge 3-ring binder to read over chapter one and found that what I thought was good was, in fact, shallow characterization and boring exposition. Instead of penciling in corrections line by line, I sat down at my laptop, heaved a sigh of dread, and typed "Part One, Chapter 1." This is going to be an uphill battle, no mistake. I refuse to set a deadline yet. Doing so, I fear, will be setting myself up for failure and expectant readers for disappointment. So, suffice to say, I'm taking it one chapter at a time, one scene at a time, one page at a time. If you look at the building as a whole and how much progress still has to be made, the job can look daunting, even impossible, but keeping focus on one brick stacked on top of another doesn't seem like that big of a deal.
So here's to the long haul! See you at the other end.
THIS WEEK'S PROGRESS
Number of pages revised: 5 1/2
Character deaths: 1
Dreadful happenings: a young prince makes a deadly move
Positive happenings: a young prince finds hope in a new friend
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Monday, August 6, 2012
Review: Wild Cards I by George RR Martin, ed.
Blurb:
“There is a secret
history of the world—a history in which an alien virus struck the Earth in the
aftermath of World War II, endowing a handful of survivors with extraordinary
powers. Some were called Aces—those with superhuman mental and physical
abilities. Others were termed Jokers—cursed with bizarre mental or physical
disabilities. Some turned their talents to the service of humanity. Others used
their powers for evil. Wild Cards is their story.”
Review:
When I became a George RR Martin fan some years ago, I
kept hearing Wild Card this and Wild Card that, but couldn’t figure out what
the hype was about. When Wild Cards:
Inside Straight, the seventeenth installment in the series, came out in
2008, I ran out and grabbed a copy. But I still didn’t see what the big deal
was. For instance, I found myself asking the same question that opens Inside Straight: “Who the f—k was
Jetboy?”
This wouldn’t do at all. I tried to track down a copy of
volume one in the series, only to learn that the book was no longer in print.
‘How can a popular series no longer have volume one?’ I asked, highly
disappointed. So when Martin announced on his Not A Blog that the book had been
re-released and that the ebook was temporarily on sale, I whooped and hollered,
grabbed my Kindle and downloaded a copy. I was in for one wild ride…
Originally published in 1986, the first installment of Wild
Cards was a collection of 10 stories and several interludes that followed a
timeline from the virus’s release in September 1946, up through the social
changes of the 50s, 60s, and 70s, all filtered through the lenses of those who
suffered the virus.
With its re-release in 2010, the original stories are joined
by 3 new tales that enhance the early progression of the Wild Card virus. Michael
Cassutt’s contribution, “Captain Cathode and the Secret Ace,” describes the
fear in Hollywood
after McCarthy’s Communist trials in the 50s, but with a twist. The HUAC
hearings not only targeted suspected Communists, but aces as well. “Powers,” by
David D. Levine, goes inside the CIA as a secret ace strives to save a
kidnapped spy while trying to remain anonymous. And Carrie Vaughn explores Jokertown
and the 80s club scene in “Ghost Girl Takes Manhattan.”
The progression of stories not only touches on well-known historical
and social events, but also on phobias. The kind of phobia that comes to dictate
how we treat our neighbors who look differently or live differently from what
is deemed “normal.” The authors managed to weave this common and dangerous
paranoia into the action until it becomes the predominant theme by the end.
Conclusion:
Wild Cards I provides
my first run-in with a collaborative work on this scale. While reading, I was
continuously astounded by how these authors managed to pool characters and
information into an elaborate patchwork that forms a dramatic, cohesive whole.
Though the book may be most accessible to readers who have some knowledge of
the events that marked the last half of the 20th Century, I think
the bizarre elements found in these stories will appeal to a new generation of
sci-fi fans.
I give Wild Cards I
five out of five magic wands:
(I’m also rating this book Mature, due to language and
sexual situations)
For another review on Wild Cards I, visit Book Spotlights at The Bearded Scribe
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